Unfledged Collected Pg 13

posted 2nd Oct 2018, 12:00 AM

Unfledged Collected Pg 13
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2nd Oct 2018, 12:00 AM

curiousdoodler

Unfortunately, Lisa is not your average civilian!


Unfledged, the story of a Vampire named Lisa, who is passing for human until she is captured by the FBI-V (vampire hunting division). She is separated from her human daughter and must find her way back to her.


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2nd Oct 2018, 3:36 AM

Otaku

The downside of not knowing this world is that I have no idea if a non-homicidal vampire is unusual, uncommon, rare, unheard of, or if it is supposed to be impossible.

This isn't a criticism, merely an observation; maybe the story only works if things are revealed in this order. Or maybe I just missed where exactly what I said above was explained. XP

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3rd Oct 2018, 3:39 PM

curiousdoodler

I thought that question might be coming up soon. There is some explanation coming up in the next few pages. The challenge of releasing a page a week is balancing exposition and excitement.

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3rd Oct 2018, 9:26 PM

Otaku

Okay. I'm looking forward to things becoming clear. :)

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