Unfledged Collected Pg 39

posted 2nd Apr 2019, 12:00 AM

Unfledged Collected Pg 39
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2nd Apr 2019, 12:00 AM


So hungry!

Unfledged, the story of a Vampire named Lisa, who is passing for human until she is captured by the FBI-V (vampire hunting division). She is separated from her human daughter and must find her way back to her.

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2nd Apr 2019, 12:39 AM


I still don’t like this guy.

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view HiFranc's profile

2nd Apr 2019, 3:25 AM


I’m guessing that it’s either that she loves pig blood and/or her efforts to hide her status means that she doesn’t eat that often.

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2nd Apr 2019, 2:01 PM


I suspect it is that she doesn't allow herself to consume human blood, though it could just be that she's "hungry" enough anything is better than nothing. My own dietary restrictions are due to digestive health issues, but I've got enough experience wolfing down stuff I'm tired of eating because at least it is food to know the two aren't mutually exclusive.

What worries me is something which would be acceptable - even good - if we'd seen less cruelty and/or a little more competence from her captors. I know nothing about curiousdoodler, but I'm getting worried that Lisa is The Woobie, or worse still, a Sympathetic Sue. Alternatively, maybe she isn't but the problem is that everyone involved in this agency has been presented as cruel and/or incompetent... at least how I read it.

I mean, Lisa is still showing self-restraint and they're still assuming the worst. Again, that means they're pretty evil themselves or stupid or both. Yeah, I might be checking out soon, as you can tell. If this is a quality work, pay me no mind.

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